- For my end-of-term portfolio I chose my Descriptive essay entitled, "Steel, Wood, Polymer, and Alloy." I chose this essay because I believe it truly illustrates my ability to describe in detail an object without giving up the object. My Research paper outlining the futility of "gun-free zones" further supports my use of vocabulary and ability to effectively defend my position.
- I believe my grade for my portfolio should be an A. This is because my average grade for my papers is a B and after analyzing and fixing the grammatical errors this should bump them up to an A.
- The portfolio that I reviewed was Claire Reyburn's. Throughout her writings she utilized a variety of descriptive phrases and words to thoroughly describe her point of view. Her descriptive essay detailing a girl's adventure kept me guessing and inquisitive while I was reading. Overall I was very impressed with Claire's work and growth as a writer over the course of this class.
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