Mine is Still Better

• I have chosen my exemplification essay, "Hot Shower or Nuclear Waste" as my third piece to my portfolio. My reason Behind choosing this essay is because every person that has read this essay has always enjoyed the content and imagination behond writing my paper. The descriptions on all my heros and examples was spot on and made reading my paper easy and fun.
• I believe my portfolio should be an A+ because I have worked hard on correcting all of my past mistakes and finding new ways to improve my grade. I pretty much live at the writing center as often as I can to get multiple different points of view on my papers along with corrections. I have had multiple peer reviews after I got a grade on my paper. I'm alway looking for something I can improve on in any class and english is no different. I have always demanded an A out of my self and dont accept anything less.
• My favorite portfolio was my own. I read my peers portfolio and they sound good but always seem rushed.