RESEARCH
- My research paper needs to be mechanically changed. I use "you and I" way to much. The mechanics of the paragraphs is where I lost most of my points. My use of plural words and commas destroys my essays.
- There are a few senteences that needed to be explained more but other then that, I liked my paper.
- I have not started my essay yet. Working on my review essay.
- Im trying to choose between my desciptive and exemplication essays. They are both my favorite but Im leaning towards my exemplification essay due to the creativity of the writing and topic. The topic is rolling around in nucleur waster to develop nucleur powers.
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