Thursday, September 11, 2014

Descriptive Essay

Delirious
            The beep is low and slow. One long drawn out note that seemingly disappears into the air the longer it continues. Why doesn’t someone just unplug the damn machine? I think to myself. I am then utterly baffled by the voice inside of head. It echoes and reverberates through my skull as if there is nothing but empty space between my left ear and the lobe of my right.  Confused, I figure it is just the obnoxious beeping getting to me, increasing the volume of my thoughts. 
I quickly exit the room and enter into a bright hallway full of bustling people. Everyone has a purpose and a place to be. It feels as though I’m walking down a crowded sidewalk in New York City. Nobody makes eye contact with the others in their path, and it seems like the only important thing to each individual is keeping a steady pace in order to reach their final destination in a timely manner. This is fine with me I guess. I put my head down like everyone else; hands in my pockets, and stare at my knock off Steve Madden combat boots as I trudge further down the hallway.
I need to find my mom. I know I came here with her but where did she wander off to? Usually that woman, “Karen” as her friends like to call her, is so unbelievably saturated in Beyonce’s “Midnight Heat” body spray that the only technique needed to hunt her down is to start sniffing. So that is exactly what I do. I pick up a sugary whiff as I round a corner toward the end of the hallway. I turn and encounter two, large double doors. Using every ounce of my power, I shove them and burst through to the other side. Although it felt like I had put my all into this process, I glance back and the doors appear to be as tightly sealed as they were when I was on the other side. Oh well. That was the least of my concerns. Back to my German Sheppard-esque strategy of detecting Karen.
The sweet smell is growing stronger. Following my senses reminds me of hot and cold; a game I used to indulge in with the neighborhood kids before reaching high school. Before every kind of game was ruled ‘un-cool’ unless it involved alcohol or members of the opposite sex.  The rush of vanilla is overwhelming! I see a cafeteria in front of me. Could the scent be from some sort of lunch lady’s concoction or was that my mother? It never hurts to check I suppose.
I walk into the large room. It consists of tables and chairs to the left, and to the right there forms a long line of people holding trays while simultaneously waiting to be slopped a lukewarm pile of mystery meat. Seated in the chairs, and forming the line’s composition, are average looking people of every age, race and gender imaginable. There is something odd about all of them though. They look tired. There is deep worry behind their eyes.
I scan the room until finally I spot her.  Mrs. Karen Johnson is sitting to the left in the back corner of the completely linoleum dining hall. The fluorescent lights make the bags under her eyes look as though they are about to burst out of her skull.  The same worried look falls behind her gaze, but other than that she looks completely detached. The emotion center of her brain may as well be switched off. She holds a cup of coffee in her hands, which has obviously gone cold. It lacks steam and as I began to walk closer I can tell it has hardly been sipped.
“Mom!” I yell as I draw closer. My voice sounds like I am underwater, but that can only be blamed on the acoustics in the sprawling room I’m sure. She does not look up from her coffee. I don’t believe she heard me.
“MOM.” I keep yelling. She looks up slowly as though she hears me, but her worried expression is still blank. Her stare cuts through my body like glass. With that look, the harmful realization that she doesn’t see me either starts to sink in. I flail my arms, scream, and make a scene but it’s as though nobody knows I’m there.  I am invisible to the world and I don’t know why.
I attempt to cry but tears don’t come. Normally in an upsetting situation like this my breathing becomes rapid and almost uncontrollable, but now my chest doesn’t even move. What is happening? Where am I? The cafeteria begins to spin and my vision goes blurry. Suddenly the brightest flash of light I have ever seen stabs at my corneas, and everything goes black.
The beep is low and slow. Beep… Beep… Beep… My eyes open and I am surrounded by men and women all wearing white coats. I see the blurry outline of my mother’s silhouette as my eyes adjust to the light. I hear whispers from the crowd of colorless coats.
It’s a miracle.
How in the world?
My mother bursts into tears as she stares to directly into my eyes. “You’re alive! My baby is alive!”

 By Claire Reyburn


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